For
our holiday recount we wrote a letter to a friend. Our focus was on ‘hooking’ the audience
through use of figurative language. Here
are some highlights that made me smile.
“You will love to hear
about my holiday, it was so cool you’ll be sad to have missed it.”
“You wouldn’t believe
how much fun I’ve had these holidays.”
“I like that
you’re as nice as ice-cream and as beautiful as a flower.”
“I jumped as high
as a leopard, it was as much fun as a spectacular birthday party with
suspicious jumping people on the trampoline.”
“The movie Storks
was so funny I nearly fell out of my seat!”
“We went down the giant
slide as fast as a rocket, wheeeeee”
“I went to the little
penguins and they were so cute, and one stared right at me!”
“The hot pool was
so hot it nearly burned my pants off.”
“I went dirt biking and I went as fast as a flash!”
“We played a family
cricket test match and I bowled incredibly.”
“We went to the Pancake
Rocks and it was as pretty as a Monarch Butterfly.”
“I saw the Secret
Life of Pets and it was so funny I got the hiccups.”
“We were treated to see the
hilarious movie Storks. If you saw it
you would pee your pants with laughter.”
“I had a flipping good
time at Flipping Out.”
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